From 8d73c4827fcdcccaba96c07107fa543382225ad9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Eric Branlund Date: Tue, 25 Aug 2020 07:53:10 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Corrected typo in the English description of the Hatchet of Elmi. --- lib/edit/a_info.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/lib/edit/a_info.txt b/lib/edit/a_info.txt index 3c163a206..62442eb2e 100644 --- a/lib/edit/a_info.txt +++ b/lib/edit/a_info.txt @@ -3879,8 +3879,8 @@ W:15:10:60:50000 P:0:3d5:5:19:0 F:DEX | STEALTH | HIDE_TYPE | FORCE_WEAPON | F:KILL_HUMAN | VORPAL | SEE_INVIS | -D:$This is a hatchet of Elmi who was a horrible muder of -D:$Raffnor. +D:$This is a hatchet of Elmi who was a horrible murderer of +D:$ Raffnor. D:ラフノール中を震え上がらせた殺人鬼エルミの使った手斧だ。 D:ラフノールはこの殺人鬼を捕らえるために、20人以上の行者 D:(エスパー)を投入したという。「この手口には見覚えがある…」 -- 2.24.3 (Apple Git-128) From b72d6a928f4713c28304371bf91d2787a18c8d4f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Eric Branlund Date: Tue, 25 Aug 2020 07:58:50 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] For clarity, reworded the second sentence of the English description for the Styx ogre. --- lib/edit/r_info.txt | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/lib/edit/r_info.txt b/lib/edit/r_info.txt index eeec9e694..67eddcb62 100644 --- a/lib/edit/r_info.txt +++ b/lib/edit/r_info.txt @@ -22790,9 +22790,11 @@ F:IM_FIRE | RES_DARK | RES_NETH | NO_FEAR | NO_CONF | NO_SLEEP S:1_IN_8 S:SCARE | BLIND | CONF | HOLD | BO_NETH | BR_NETH D:$It is an ogre who guards Styx following its masters. -D:$ It destroys cairn piled up by children having died before their parents. +D:$ It destroys the cairns piled up for children who have died before +D:$ their parents. D:奪衣婆と懸衣翁に仕え、三途の川に佇む鬼だ。 D:それは時々賽の河原を見回って、積石塚を破壊して回る。 + N:1131:土の鬼 E:Earth ogre G:O:u -- 2.24.3 (Apple Git-128) From 84ab332adb0fd634c8b9e12f8ed57c602697012c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Eric Branlund Date: Tue, 25 Aug 2020 08:03:07 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Corrected typo in the English desription of Rhan-Tegoth. Put spaces at the beginning of the lines rather than the end to satisfy git. --- lib/edit/r_info.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/lib/edit/r_info.txt b/lib/edit/r_info.txt index 67eddcb62..4acaed13a 100644 --- a/lib/edit/r_info.txt +++ b/lib/edit/r_info.txt @@ -15783,11 +15783,11 @@ F:IM_ACID | IM_ELEC | IM_POIS | NO_CONF | NO_SLEEP | RES_WATE S:1_IN_5 | S:S_DEMON | BR_ACID | S_UNDEAD | S_KIN | CONF | SCARE | S:MIND_BLAST | BR_CONF -D:$"An almost globular torso, with six long, sinuous limbs terminating -D:$in clab-like claws. From the upper end a subsidiary globe bulged -D:$forward bubble-like; its triangle of three staring, fishy eyes, -D:$its foot-long and evidently flexible proboscis, and a distended -D:$lateral system analogous to gills, suggested that it was a head." +D:$"An almost globular torso, with six long, sinuous limbs terminating +D:$ in crab-like claws. From the upper end a subsidiary globe bulged +D:$ forward bubble-like; its triangle of three staring, fishy eyes, +D:$ its foot-long and evidently flexible proboscis, and a distended +D:$ lateral system analogous to gills, suggested that it was a head." D:太古に宇宙から北極にやって来た神。 D:「胴はほぼ球形をしていて、まがりくねる手足が６本備わり、先端は蟹 D:のような鋏になっていた。胴の上からは補助的な球体が泡のようにまえ -- 2.24.3 (Apple Git-128)